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  1. Funny, but this didn’t strike me as awkward as you’d led me to expect.

    I like the snippet a lot, though. Especially when Lorelei says “I’m not mortal”.

    1. It could have been worse for them. You’re right about that, but awkward was the word that fit best when I was coming up with a title. Thank you! Lorelei was a great character and easy to write.

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